Your personal developmental editor
Jim Dempsey is a professional member of the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading.
His experience and critical thinking will improve the flow and logic of your writing while still respecting and retaining your unique voice.
Jim has written many articles on writing and editing, and is a regular contributor to Writer Unboxed.
Send Jim the first 1500 words of your novel for a FREE SAMPLE EDIT.
What’s included in a developmental edit?
Jim will edit your novel line by line to:
- correct grammatical errors, typos, spelling mistakes, and ensure spelling and formatting consistency
- give detailed suggestions to improve sentence syntax and paragraph structure
- check for repetition and redundancy and factual errors
He will then compile a detailed feedback and analysis of your novel covering:
- each individual chapter
- your story as a whole
- all the main characters
- perspective
- pacing
- plot
- tone
- target audience
- potential market